November 28.2007,
Two days before my birthday... I´ll never forguet that day,everything look so perfect... My classmates Juan and Borja went to the Noth of Chile, they went to Antofagasta for a few days and I was on holidays in Atacama, so they called me,because they knew that I was there at that time so we decide to meet to go out for a trip on plane.
We decide to go to the Atacama´s Desert but everything went out so wrong...suprisingly the engine of the plane started to fail and we started to lose height... few minutes later the plane crashed in the desert, I felt driven to despair and I thought that I´ll going to die!!! Pete, the turist guide is death and Susan, the pilot has both legs broken, while Borja, Juan and I went unharmed! thank God...but the problem was that we crashed in a zone far of everything, far of the river, far of the road and very, very far of the village, so we decide to fix Susan´s legs at the straightest position we could, after that I´ll have to stay with Susan while Juan and Borja went to looking for help at the forest, that wasn´t so far after all...and when they come back with a man in a truck we ,Susan and I, cut go home finally. That´s how we survived to one of the most shoking experienses of my life.
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Great writing Pamela - and very emotional retelling of the events!
Just a few things to keep in mind:
Check your past tenses carefully - e.g. decided
Use far from instead of "far of".
Pete, the tour guide, was dead... rather than "Pete, the turist guide is death".
and when they came back with a man in a truck, we, Susan and I, were finally able to go home. rather than "and when they come back with a man in a truck we ,Susan and I, cut go home finally."
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